http://townx.org/death_machine_11_5_1995 Comments for "DEATH MACHINE (11/5/1995)" en http://townx.org/death_machine_11_5_1995#comment-12197 <p>The one at the end of Clay Lake?</p> Thu, 02 Nov 2006 03:26:42 -0600 elliot comment 12197 at http://townx.org http://townx.org/death_machine_11_5_1995#comment-12185 <p>I think I know which bridge you're talking about :)</p> Wed, 01 Nov 2006 16:15:41 -0600 Ben Francis comment 12185 at http://townx.org http://townx.org/death_machine_11_5_1995 <p>A bank in summer<br /> A ripped underwear page<br /> A magazine of lists<br /> Things making noise</p> <p>Bridge like tread of shoe<br /> Hangs over them<br /> Tatty rope, him on the end<br /> Swinging</p> <p><hr/></p> <p><strong>Note:</strong> I like the simplicity of this. It reminds me of the river bank near the house where I grew up in Spalding, Lincolnshire. That's what I was thinking about when I wrote it. The bareness of it evokes the boredom I sometimes felt living in a small town where there was nothing to do.</p> http://townx.org/death_machine_11_5_1995#comments texts Fri, 27 Oct 2006 18:33:00 -0500 elliot 430 at http://townx.org